Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR
YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR
(#) dennisud 2010-04-27 05:49:57 PM
A narrative style isn't bad but I'd like a few more scenes where the characters can flex their emotional muscles a bit more!
As Harry & Hermione have definitely hooked up I wonder about your statement of Harry being involved with more of the Hogwarts Heroines?
I hope Luna Lovegood is one and maybe the only other!
;-)
As Harry & Hermione have definitely hooked up I wonder about your statement of Harry being involved with more of the Hogwarts Heroines?
I hope Luna Lovegood is one and maybe the only other!
;-)
Author's response
I think your criticism is totally correct -- this isn't a big detailed epic as I used to write. Too much on my plate, but I hope you enjoy this somewhat more paired down story
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