Okay, that last line: So long and goodnight, Eve.
Never before have I cried while reading a fan fiction, and I swear, something in my heart snapped while reading that line, and I just burst into tears. So congratulations on bringing me (finally) to tears.
Holy motherfracking Jesus, totally did not see Eve's death coming. Not at all. is still in shock
Excellently written, you capture emotions beautifully. Very, very well done, and I hope you continue to write :]