Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) GinnyMyLove 2010-05-18 04:27:33 PM

You had Delores "splitch" instead of Splinch, but other than that a very enjoyable chapter.

It does seem you are "telling" rather than having the characters reveal things but with so much information I suppose thats just the format this story is going to take.

Still looking forward to the next installment.

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