Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR
(#) GinnyMyLove 2010-05-18 04:27:33 PM
It does seem you are "telling" rather than having the characters reveal things but with so much information I suppose thats just the format this story is going to take.
Still looking forward to the next installment.
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