Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR
YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR
(#) GinnyMyLove 2010-05-18 04:27:33 PM
You had Delores "splitch" instead of Splinch, but other than that a very enjoyable chapter.
It does seem you are "telling" rather than having the characters reveal things but with so much information I suppose thats just the format this story is going to take.
Still looking forward to the next installment.
It does seem you are "telling" rather than having the characters reveal things but with so much information I suppose thats just the format this story is going to take.
Still looking forward to the next installment.
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