I have not yet read your story and with a rewrite I will just read the new one but I am willing to beta it for now as the basic plot as seen in the description is one that is hard to find and I generally like. I am willing to beta at least the first chapter or 2 and we can see where it goes from there. If you are interested send me an email at hashimgambitbeta@mcgurrin.net and let me know. Contacting me via the site might take a while as it seems they just started sending out emails again and have a huge back log that they are working to get out.