(#) RAJR 2010-05-22
I enjoy the story thus far, but I am a tad bit confused. In your first fic of immortal fangs, I recall a mention of Narcissa, but that was all it was. In this story, she is not only mentioned, but also a participant. How did she come into the picture when she wasn't even involved directly in the first story? You might want to focus on completing the first story, so the continuing stories make sense. Other than that, the story is well written, and an interesting read. Keep up the great work!