Review for No Bargain
First of all, who were the diamonds for? Next, so Asami was too stingy to help Akihito get a new camera after destroying his old one? And most important of all, this story made it seem like Akihito was truly insignificant to Asami. I mean, come on, choking him like that? Being a hopeless AkihitoxAsami romantic fan, I wasn't really expecting a lot of mushy stuff, but there didn't seem any real progress in their relationship in this story.
I really like your other works, so I hope you don't take offense at my comments. (^__^)
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