Review for No Bargain

No Bargain

(#) milli 2010-06-09 10:49:05 PM

Hello! Is this story really supposed to end at that? It was so... hanging. There were plenty of things that were left unexplained.

First of all, who were the diamonds for? Next, so Asami was too stingy to help Akihito get a new camera after destroying his old one? And most important of all, this story made it seem like Akihito was truly insignificant to Asami. I mean, come on, choking him like that? Being a hopeless AkihitoxAsami romantic fan, I wasn't really expecting a lot of mushy stuff, but there didn't seem any real progress in their relationship in this story.

I really like your other works, so I hope you don't take offense at my comments. (^__^)

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