good start until the last paragraph... sorry but any story that puts that thing with the hero just says don't bother reading. Nothing against you as it was JKR who made the idea that HP who hates his fame would actually end up with the stalker fan-girl ginny. It took me two months after my daughter read that crap to make her understand that friends make the best life partners and that fighting and yelling at each other does not mean you would make a good married couple. Maybe it's a British thing???