Oh my damn, that was really good. I loved the moon metaphor more than life itself, and the way you worked in the lyrics. I'm also impressed that you made me feel bad for Brendon, when clearly he's being a douche to both Elle and Ryan. Alas, this was amazing and you're awesome. :)
Author's response
:') Why, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for commenting on the moon metaphor because I enjoyed that part of the one-shot as well.
Thanks for the review. :)