Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) Qellar 2010-07-02 05:53:28 AM

Love this story.

What I like to see is since Dr. Granger is using the Force and is member of the Sport and Social group aka SAS is to have Dr. Granger get Harry in contact with more of the Sport and Social group members and see if they can use the force as well. Sometimes it is better to have blaster aka rifles and few snipers at your back in case Mr. Murphy strikes giving you FUBAR.

Who were those 4 eagle birds protecting hedwig? do not remember them being mentioned in earlier chapters...

Looks like Draco the moron, snape the idiot and dumbles the Dark Lord are having a bad day.... hope it gets worse... lol

Author's response

While a really good reccommendation, I'm trying to keep this group as small as possible. By my reckoning, roughly one person in ten thousand is magical,and I'm assuming that only one out of between ten and twenty magicals, is also force sensitive, it stands to reason that even with chance thrown in, there wouldn't be but five or six Jedi potentials in the entirety of the British military. It's possible, but not likely.

Mister Murphy will come to play, but Harry has Hermione to keep him occupied. (Not to mention Carolyn, Augusta, Amelia, Arthur, Algie, and Graswold.

Snipers: While an excellent idear, the venue for the final showdown makes that impossible...unfortunately.

Sorry.

The four Eagle Owls: They were extra's. Remember those dragon looking things from LotR?

Looks like Draco the moron, snape the idiot and dumbles the Dark Lord are having a bad day.... hope it gets worse... lol

It will.

BWAH BWAHAHA BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

Glad you liked the show, and thanks for the review.

Alorkin

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