(#) siaru 2010-07-19
Oooookay... The rating buttons appear to be broken just now. Pfui. +1 moving. So there. Yes, that H/Hr scene was uncomfortable. That says you nailed it close enough, because those scenes ARE uncomfortable (hellish, actually, in my experience) when you're living 'em. Keep going, please.
True enough; it wouldn't have felt right if it hadn't been awkward. I was worried I made it a bit too awkward/sappy, but most people seem to think it turned out OK.
I haven't begun work on Chapter 4 just yet, but should do so soon. There will definitely be at least 5 chapters. Could it be more? Possibly. I've given up on trying to gauge how long my stories will end up being.