Review for What He'll Sorely Miss?
(#) siledubhghlase 2010-07-20 09:35:42 PM
The raw honesty in this chapter made it the success it is. And yes, good fluff is very hard to write, and sex is even harder (no pun intended). Love scenes of any kind can be either sweet and romantic or shallow and sophomoric. You hit sweet and romantic right on the head here. Well done!
Glad you liked it. I think your review was more eloquent than the story itself is. :)
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