Review for Salvation
(#) siledubhghlase 2010-07-24 10:20:45 AM
I have only one complaint and that is the size of the "small room" you described in which Harry wiped out Tom's cannon fodder. 100 yards by 200 yards is twice the size of the NFL regulation playing field. That's not a small room, even with 150 people in it. Now...10 yards by 20 yards would be cramped for that many people.
Anyway, good job so far, so I'm going to read on.
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