Review for Serpent Souls, Merged as One
My picky comment is - please please please put some time into figuring out "who" Vs "whom". The frequent incorrect use of "whom" gets very irritating, I think it's been wrong every time you've used it.
The rest of your writing is rather good, particularly your dialogue; so, apart from hoping you can overcome that one bad habit, I look forward to more of a fun story. Thanks for writing ... p
I would sit with him on the shoreline, sifting through the washed up wreckages of misfit shells and ...
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What happens when Mikey finds a notebook, the entries becoming more and more depressing, showcasing ...
A lament, to what was. *Rated R for language*
This will now instead be a series of Gundam SEED based oneshots in a similar fashion to Sheltie's wo...
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