(#) erik 2010-08-18
Another well written chapter. I thought the training section was well done and was nicely balanced with bits of humour. I admit to being surprised at the Special Operations centre being a school and then they made a fatal mistake, and I didn't know there was a 28th SAS regiment. Well done & thanks.
Author's response
Heya Erik.
Thanks for the kind words. It's too easy to focus on the training to the exclusion of everything else, but with Luna's quirky personality it's not easy.
Personally I thought the mistake was hilarious. the Deez are so insular they'd easily mistake Special Ops for Special needs.
I don't know if there is a 28th SAS. It really doesn't matter though.
Alorkin