Review for The birth of Frerard
The birth of Frerard
(#) vampyGee 2010-08-19 06:46:45 PM
Ok, well for your first it isnt bad. There wasn't really any grammer mistakes. Well, it was a lil shirt tho, it was both humorous and cute, but a little cliche, not trying to be rude. I'd say its good, so keep on going.
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