Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) erik 2010-08-23

A well written chapter, especially the trainees showing up the professionals in the nicest possible way. And a great court scene, although I thought if they were sentenced to thirty years house arrest, why are the ankle bracelts for twenty?

Author's response

Heya Erik.

It was a lot of fun showing the Pro's that the Jedi students could do it better faster and stronger. When I was a SEAL, I was in fabulous shape. That's the kind if shape I have the Jedi Trainees in.

Thirty -v- twenty: Aah, crap! I blew it. I originally decided on twenty years, but decided to up it to thirty. I missed the second reference. It's been corrected.

Alorkin