Well, you're way better at poetry than I am. I'd rather be enjoying your good poetry other than sulking over my bad poetry.
In any event, you're really good, Ollie. :] I could see this as a song, but hey, what you do with your talent is none of my business (I hope to goodness that doesn't sound wrong).
I'd definitley love to see some more from you. :] I'm putting you in my alerts just to make sure I don't miss anything.