Lawl. Aww, that was cute. I'm thinking about posting the one I wrote... -ponders- Mine's not very... ehrmm, cute, like yours is though..
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Well to be honest when I wrote this, I was writing it for a Panic! forum site and they would only let you have PG-13 about it so yeah. I say post the one you got. I'm sure it's better than mine.