Review for The Board
The Board
(#) smeagol 2010-09-16 01:00:05 AM
A very well crafted one shot story. It was very refreshing and engaging to see the character development of the younger generation and their well executed interaction with the older generation with poise and humor. My only criticism is that I could not fully accept (willing belief) that the character of Lucius Malfoy could be so easily reinstated as chairman of the board of Hogwarts so quickly and easily. I understand how intriguing a character he is, but it didn't ring true to me. The story could of been done without him, and it would of been more challenging to develop the older characters on the board. You could still do that and it would be an interesting one shot story in itself.
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