Review for B.D.P.D.

B.D.P.D.

(#) kingblack 2010-10-03 10:51:12 AM

Pretty good. Might wanna lengthen it and give a more detailed explanation of Harry's life up until, during, and after he discovered his magic. And get rid of the Remus thing. Other than that, please continue.

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