Another amazing two chapters, I really enjoy this story. It has me thinking through a lot of things as i read it. I am hooked on it, the way you explain everything keeps me entranced. I look forward to the next update.
Cel
Author's response
Hello, Celexs.
I thank you both for your kind words and for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you're enjoying the show.
Although the incidence of ridiculous Deus ex Machina has dropped remarkably in the past few years, I've seen (and shuddered at) far too many stories where things are 'just assumed'. I prefer to let the audience know why I put this down.
Since you enjoy reading, maybe it's time you started to write.
Alorkin