I agree. Amazing except for all of the POVs. Possibly make each POV longer or limit the amount of different POVs in each. It seems like just as your getting comfortable with the character it changes. Just a tip, everything is great though. I loved the chapter
IM SORRY IM SORRY IM SORRY IM SORRY!
I'll change my brain, I feel like everyone should know whats going on because i've been thinking about parts for ages!