I like this a lot, but I'm gonna end up getting hated by a lot of people as I'm gonna be picky and just make a couple of points.
You've got a good intro for this, it's very realistic which is always good. My only thing is that to me it seems slightly Mary-Sue-ish. I don't think it's intentional but it makes me wonder whether this is going to end up that way.
Another thing is Grammar, on the whole it's good but I did notice a few inconsistencies with names and other areas, again, probably completely unintentional.
Apart from that I really enjoyed reading this and I'm looking forward to what will happen next.