Review for Salvation

Salvation

(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-11-30

Please check your Chapter numbering.

Cah11 humbly presents
Salvation
Chapter 7: Training

Recap of chapter 9:

And with that, the Headmaster walked out of his office toward the kitchens, several faint clinks emanating from under his robes, as if there were several glass phials concealed in them.


"The recap of chapter 9:" never happend and it should have been "recap of chapter 07:, NOT 09".



When did Harry accidentally bonded a phoenix to himself all in the course of two weeks?

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Salvation

Chapter10: Meetings, both Pure and Nefarious


The above should be chapter 08 NOT 10.

I realy like this story I hope BumbleBORK will get his.

I I am glad Hermione saw the truth and went to Harry, and after she is heald she and Harry can be friend again same with Tonks.