Oh, my gosh, that is tottaly amazing! pleease, you gotta write more. I've seen your note, so, here's some ideas:
- a date of them two, or stuff like that
- maybe you can describe the call from Scarlet, so we would know what happend.
JUST PLEASE, write more! ;D
Thanks a lot for the ideas, I'll try some things out and see how well they work, but I am really pleased with how this story turned out and I don't want to ruin it!!