Review for To Duel For Honor
To Duel For Honor
(#) FujiwaraHamano 2006-09-25 03:50:08 AM
I need to bring something in your story to your attention, if only because I am a nit-picker for technical details.
"I've confirmed it. He made a total of 6 Horcruxes, with himself as the 7th for magical power. The diary is indeed one, and he did not know where it was, nor that it had been destroyed. The others are a ring from his Father, a locket, from his mother, that was Salazar Slytherin's, a pair of cups that belonged to Helga Hufflepuff, a dagger that belonged to Rowena Ravenclaw, a gauntlet that Godric Gryffindor once wore in battle, and finally, his snake, Nagini.
If you look closely, you clearly list seven Horcuxes, wihout listing Voldemort himself, after stating that he was the seventh.
"I've confirmed it. He made a total of 6 Horcruxes, with himself as the 7th for magical power. The diary is indeed one, and he did not know where it was, nor that it had been destroyed. The others are a ring from his Father, a locket, from his mother, that was Salazar Slytherin's, a pair of cups that belonged to Helga Hufflepuff, a dagger that belonged to Rowena Ravenclaw, a gauntlet that Godric Gryffindor once wore in battle, and finally, his snake, Nagini.
If you look closely, you clearly list seven Horcuxes, wihout listing Voldemort himself, after stating that he was the seventh.
Author's response
Well, DRAT! You're right. You're the first in quite a few reviews of this story to catch that one, but you're right! Thanks, I need the nit-picking! Please, feel free to bring any more nits to my attention! Especially if they're in Family Matters - Loose Ends, since that one is still in progress!
I'll fix that in the eventual re-write - because this version just doesn't feel fleshed out enough to me.
And thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed the story, otherwise!
I'll fix that in the eventual re-write - because this version just doesn't feel fleshed out enough to me.
And thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed the story, otherwise!
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