Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) Zucht 2011-03-04 01:45:25 AM

Excellent story! The ending was a bit clunky and the Luna twist came out of nowhere. I have to say I really enjoyed the pacing of the story. I would have had Fluer try to mess with harry with her allure, but I realy liked Hermione's character - much better than the over-reaction protrayed by most authors.

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