Review for My Mistake? Being Me.
My Mistake? Being Me.
(#) kageshi 2011-03-19 06:45:46 PM
I really love this story! You've got to continue it! Something that could be improved though is the sentence structure and predictability, every time something bad happens Frankie just runs away. Where is all of Frankie's fight? I do love your plot line though!
Love,
KageShi :P
Love,
KageShi :P
Author's response
Thanks. I've Been Waiting For Someone To Critsize...But Everyones So Nice...TBH i don't like to critze but it's gotta be done, other wise how do we learn you see :) thanks xo
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