(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-03-30 01:13:29 AM
XD this is really great for a 2AM story i think it is amazing and really funny and cute and original and hot and wow i talk to much XD
lol but yeah i liked that mikey was trying to solve it so he could get some sleep aww i love mikey
and i love the fact that you had gee in his skelenton pajamas haha ALL HAIL SKELENTON PAJAMAS!!!! GEEE PLEASE BRING THEM BACK
he should soo wear them on stage haha awww
and i absoloutly loved this bit
Mikey was awoken by the familiar groans, only this time, he realised in horror, they were coming from the same bunk.
“Eeewww!” Mikey whimpered, pulling the duvet over his head in disgust.
He’d have preferred the dreams...
haha soo funny XD and this bit
“Seriously, you’re a fucking legend, Ray! Where would I be without you?”
“Umm…electrocuted by the toaster?” Ray grinned teasingly.
classs and finally i loved this bit too
“A great white shark landing on the tour bus wouldn’t wake you up!” Mikey snapped
haha made me laugh i just love all of it :D i dunno what to rate it ;p hmmmmmmm maybe funny :)
anyway i think i should rate it now lol bet you cant beat this review XD
wow, that was a really long (and awesome!) review...i think it's beaten all of mine for your stories so far :O just wait til you next post something...i'll try and beat your review then hehehe xD though it's not gunna be easy...:P
okay, i'm gunna shut up now! thanks for reeeading :D
p.s. yes, ALL HAIL THE SKELETON PJs!! they are sooo awesome- you're right, he should wear them onstage xD
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