while reading chapter face slowly turns from calm to shock and finally to horror and resulting to cover up eyes very...um...well described :L the only problem i have is the title it's named after a muse song and i hate muse! if you had your friends obsessed hearing about them every day for 6 months makes you hate a band but now thank god my friends don't like them anymore and they are fully obsessed with MCR same as me!
I don't know whether "well described" is a good thing or a bad thing,considering you also included your horror and your covering of eyes,but I'm gonna go ahead and take it as a compliment.If not,I'm sorry if it upset/pissed you off.
None of my friends like My Chemical Romance.They like Justin Bieber and Rihanna but that's their opinion and they're perfectly entitled to it.
I love Muse,and have done so since Sing for Absolution was out in 2003.I Loved them before I loved MCR.I've seen them live twice and they're gods in my opinion.
So,yes,I love Muse.And it's my story.So I'll call the chapters whatever I want,each one after a Muse song if I wish.