Review for The Little Merman
(#) HarukosSlaveKitten 2011-06-17 01:12:44 AM
However, I suggest breaking bits of it into smaller paragraphs.
Also I noticed a few spelling mistakes.
But overall this was a great story. I look forward to day 3.
There was much more to 'The Epilogue' than was shown in Book 7.
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