Review for I've got a dirty, little secret.. Or maybe one to many.

I've got a dirty, little secret.. Or maybe one to many.

(#) i_bleed_neon 2011-07-14 12:21:05 PM

It's like I've just killed a person. That's a good way to look at it. I've just yanked their head off and poured their blood everywhere.. It's spewing all around me, leaking over the rips in the worn and torn skin. The now pale, completely white corpse is freezing in my arms, eyes glassy and still. Their metalic blood is staining my skin, my clothes. I try wiping it off of my hands, but it never goes. I'm a murderer. That's it. That'll stop me.

THAT^^^^^^IS GENIUS!

I loved the way you worded that whole paragraph. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. Please update soon because I cannot wait for more. (:

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Ah wow, thank you so so much! :D

ah awesome, I like being a favorite. >_< xx

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