Review for What She Has

What She Has

(#) fyre_byrd 2006-02-06 07:33:58 AM

This story is very bittersweet.I like the simplicity of the scene and the strength of Fujin's emotional response to it.

Fujin's matter of fact inner voice is very interesting. I like the tone of her thoughts. It seems to work well with her character. And I can believe that Fujin might like Quistic this way. I can see her admiring the differences between the two of them.

I like the way that Fujin holds back from doing anything. That is realistic as well. It's a lovely short little character study.

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