I really like this story, but there is one tiny thing that rubs me the wrong way. It's that you seem to put the wrong word in, it looks the same but it means something different. For example - definitely and defiantly. ONLY THING apart from that I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Bands:
Paramore
Framing Hanley
Panic! At the disco
Cobra starship
MCR
ATL
FOB
They're the ones that come into my mind instantaneously, if I thought about it the list'd be a mile long.
Author's response
hehe thanks and omg i just realised that, i'm glad you told me cuz i didn't even seee XD at least i will know now haha tar.
i'm really glad you like it, more soon :D
awesime choice :p
chazom
xx
p.s. my list is defo long haha