Review for Smile
(#) VampyreRayne 2011-07-23 10:33:01 AM
This was truly a beautiful story. I like how Neville just chokes down his rage and keeps smiling. Smiling for Harry, because he loves him and that's what you do when you love someone. It doesn't matter if they love you back or if they're with someone else; if you love someone than you want them to be happy and so you keep smiling for them when they are. You swallow down the bitterness and the pain and the anger and just grin and bear it. I think you got that point across so beautifully. I don't even normally like the idea of Neville/Harry but this one really made me wish they'd ended up together. I just felt so strongly the pain and heartbreak Neville was feeling. Good job!
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