wow wow wow soooo goood i love it :)
though what is the wig like though, cuz all i keep imagining is a weird elvis presley like wig XD lol and then with the glasses i imagine him having tassles soo bad XD hehe could you tell us more about what his wig looks like and his new clothings for his new character please :) i neeed that elvis look out my head lol
other than that, written reallly well and again fab idea, i was gutted when the chapter came to an end awww :/ i hope you continue :) it's amazing i'm really excited to find out more
chazom
xx