Whoa, shitload of drama. It's intense and suspenseful and everything that makes a good Killjoy story ^-^
Author's response
I honestly love your reviews, it's like having my own pep squad for my writing! I was hoping it wouldn't come off overly dramatic! I have a good 3 more chapters, chapter 11 being a HUGE one. I'm talking it may be 10 thou or more words! It's gonna be the intense one!
Clue: what hurts the most.