Review for My Chemical School

My Chemical School

(#) I_am_a_Graveyard 2011-08-11 02:36:53 AM

Can I just suggest you work on capitals, full stops and putting a "k" at the end of Frank's name...you miss it out a few times. Sorry I hate being critical about these things but they affect ther story a lot.

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