Review for I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

(#) japulapu 2011-08-15 01:23:58 AM

Still, a girl in a guy's prison, explain that won't you? Like I said before, she must be a pretty tough chick if she ended up there. For some strange reason I imagine her to be blonde with a bubblegum pink dress. It's the name and the way she talks(don't kill me). I don't love her character but nice chapter. It's definately bringing out emotions nicely.

Author's response

I don't recall ever saying it was an all-guys prison. However, if that's how you picture it, then I'd be happy to explain?

Haha, imagine her as you like, although I have no idea where you got the bubblegum pink dress from? I think she seems quite manic and tough! The audition for her interested me. :)

Anyway, thank you! :D

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