Review for A day at the mall
A day at the mall
(#) Riane46 2006-10-09 05:20:06 PM
Hi, good start, but can you please put spaces, and paragraphes. And... ex:
1: Hi, dude
2: Hi, dudette!
It's just an example
1: Hi, dude
2: Hi, dudette!
It's just an example
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