Review for I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

(#) japulapu 2011-08-18 07:38:36 AM

For some reason I liked this chapter very much. And yes, Frank has an entire "Happy" feel to him. It's actually quite funny to just look at Gerard's thoughts from a third person view. It's really frustrating(that's a good thing, incase you are wondering). You're drawing out the suspense nice and long. At the same time it doesn't look like you've run out of inspiration or ideas. The most striking thing about your writing is how flawlessly it flows. It's very smooth. The scenes aren't awkward or abrupt. This is the most detailed review I've done for you so far because I was really impressed with this chapter. I guess I just adore dark humour. Good job.

Author's response

Well, I'm very flattered right now! I'm very glad you like this chapter, and that you feel Frank has a 'Happy' vibe about him. I like that you feel I'm drawing the suspense out nice and long, and that you feel I haven't run out of ideas or inspiration. It's quite funny, because I've never been stuck for ideas, but I don't think of them, I just write as I go. I don't plan them. I'm very happy you think my writing flows as well, that's a huge compliment for me. Also, I'm happy the scenes aren't awkward or abrupt. :)

Well, detailed is good. This made me smile a lot. Thank you! :)

Ps. I like dark humor too, don't worry. XD

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