Fancy running into you here..
I loved chapter eighteen, with the brilliantly detailed and almost scary dreams everyone was having. I loved how you kinda continued it.
I don't think Ray will ever let Mikey or that girl go. Whaever he does, he'll be doing it for them. Whoever he fights, he'll be fighting for them.
Fighting for their forgiveness. Fighting for the lives they'll never see.
Fighting for the rest of their death. Maybe even a little after that.
Very good :) I know you're busy etc but I was so happy to see the alert email in my inbox. Can't wait for the next installment!