Review for Locker Room Conversations

Locker Room Conversations

(#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-10-11

Wow, this was really good! (I'm sorry for asking you to update Mind Games)I really liked how you described the emotion, and I love the idea that you came up with about Jay getting pierced with Cronus' sword... it'd make a great story (like a prequel) or flashback, and i cna't wait for the next chapter!