Review for Bad Luck

Bad Luck

(#) PartyPoison 2011-09-08

Poor Ryan, just wanting some cake. This story is one of the ones that I look forward to seeing more chapters from. The way you write this story makes me wishing that the chapters were longer so I would know what was going to happen next and wouldn't have to wait so long to know.
Nevertheless, I do not mind the waits too much. You always update one of your stories often enough that I never have to go too long without a new chapter of some story to read.