Liked the Flamels. LOVE the fact that you're keeping Egyptian IN the story. You cannot understand the depths and heights to which I love Egyptology. Please don't ever take Egypt out of this story. I know, it's your story and you'll do what you want with it. Just wanted to register my joy, that's all. I love this. There ARE other stories on many sites, where powerful types kidnap Harry or in some way gain custody of him, and then "Improve him... make him better". But this one is my favorite. Because of Egypt, and because you're not putting stuff in it that's 99% over my head, or stuff that relates to a story I don't know (crossover). Keep up the good work. :D