Review for auditions! o.O

auditions! o.O

(#) XxxFallenAngelXxxx 2011-09-30 05:13:02 AM

I have a girl and a guy(two best friends) but if you only want to use one(or none) that`s perfectly fine.
Toxic Faith. Nicknamed Toxic
Real name-James but hates it and used to go by Jamie or sometimes Jay.
Age-whatever fits but is about 18, 19 okay?
Gender-male.
Looks-natural black hair, thick fringe falls forward into face, electric blue streaks through it. (Toxic Rose`s idea) Cut into choppy layers. One eye is a blue grey colour, the other a blue green. (sometimes people do have different coloured eyes. I read it somewhere.) The fringe falls over the blue eye, which is the left one. Eyes are normally outlined with smudged black eyeliner. Often surrounded by dark circles from lack of sleep. Tall, very thin-suffered with eating disorders. Lots of scars cover most of his body (his parents abused him and he used to harm himself) the worst scar is a thick partially healed cross cut into his back.
Outfit-black jeans-not skinnies just normal ones, an old, faded, bloody, muddy band tee (the Cure, green day or Iron Maiden) red converse his best friend and her sister scribbled on. A black leather jacket covered in badges and patches. Always keeps a guitar pick in his pocket-he got it at a concert he went to with his best friend (Toxic Rose) a silver chain is worn lose around his neck that has a silver pick on it with a “D” on it. (The first initial of his friend’s real name) wears it tucked into his shirt so you can’t really see it, if you stand close enough you may catch a tiny glimpse of the silver chain. Covered in tattoos and piercings-plugs in ears, a rook and a helix. Has snakebites, his tongue pierced. Arms are almost covered with tattoos and lots on his chest. It looks a bit scary/weird though as he is so thin.
Personality-kind but thinks worst of himself, and often the world. Either very loud or very quiet. Is either extremely low, or hyper and super happy. Flirts a lot but would never cheat on someone. Has had his heart broken several times by people he truly cared about and is scared to get too close to someone again. Would die for his friends. hate being told what to do, especially if he knows it’s wrong. Loyal friend but doesn’t trust easily. Doesn’t like being without Toxic Rose-worries about her a lot. Secretly in love with her. Funny and very sarcastic.
Ray gun-black with a “gothic” silver cross going all the way around it-he finds it rather funny, as he hated religion and his parents tried to cram it down his throat.

Past-he grew up in battery city and was best friends with Dakota “(Toxic Rose) and her little sister (rose) his parents treated him badly and when they found out what they were doing to him the three of them ran away together and became killjoys.
Mask- black with red paint splatters on it that look like blood. The eye slits are cut into stars.
Anything else-bisexual parents didn’t accept him, used to be a drug addict and drank too much, but Toxic Rose helped him stop. Because of this he doesn’t drink anymore. Smokes a lot-she tried to make him stop but eventually gave in. he is a good fighter-knows some Tae kwon do, quick thinker, keeps calm under pressure.
Toxic Rose nicknamed Rose.
Age-whatever fits but is a year younger than Toxic Faith
Gender-girl
Real name-Dakota Nyx (Dakota means friend or ally, Nyx means night)
Looks-waist length black and red hair-black underneath red on top. Cut into lots of different layers, never too neat. Threatens to cut it off as it annoys her but Toxic Faith won’t let her. Is either left down or tied into a messy ponytail or sometimes two bunches/pigtails. Emerald green eyes often outlined with black or red eyeliner, red lips, pale. Average height and weight but very underdeveloped-no hips/breast. Very self conscious of this and Toxic Faith teases her about it sometimes. Tattoo of a rose on her foot and the name “Dakota” on her left wrist and “Rose” on the other. (Rose was her little sisters name) nose, tongue, lip, belly button and ears pierced-twice on the lobes and the top part of one.
Outfit. Black skinnies, black knee high studded boots-keeps a knife in left one. A black top with random bits of silver and a bleeding red rose on it surrounded by skulls. Wears a silver necklace with a “D” an “R” and a “J” on it. (her, her sisters and her best friends initials) red wristband saying “fuck all authority” written in black.
Personality-kind but thinks worst of herself. Loyal friend. Crazy and random, morbid. Not someone you want to get on the bad side of. Don’t piss her off if you enjoy living, as she will kill you, slowly. Seeks revenge a lot-doesn’t forgive easily. Very protective of her friends. Very sarcastic. Can be quite violent and doesn’t always think things through before acting. Speaks her mind. Secretly may be in love with Toxic faith-not really too sure as she has never been in a relationship before as her parents didn’t work out well. Has a bit of a trust issue but is a good person to know.
Ray gun-matches her top-skulls and bleeding roses on it.
Past-same as above pretty much, her sister is no longer alive though she got killed in a fight by a drac. The two of them both feel guilty for her death.
Mask- red with a black rose (fake) on the top left hand corner of it. The eye holes are in the shape of stars as well
Anything else-used to be a strict veggie but now will eat meat if she has to. She will complain about it very loudly though. Misses her sister terribly. Fast on her feet, can talk herself out of tricky situations and good aim.
I don’t know if you will need this, but I`ll put it anyway. (sorry for so much information)
Toxic rose can`t drive-she had some lessons but failed miserably and even wrecked the drivers ed car. But Toxic Faith has a motorbike which he says is part hers as well as his, but he is the only one who can drive it safely. (she would crash it and has done in the past)Rose sits behind him on it and grabs hold of him whenever she is on it with him. Toxic Faith can drive a car, but hates it-feels claustrophobic and feels like being in a car is like driving in a cage. He much prefers being on a motorcycle. He is often tinkering about with it and it is covered in painted on doodles and even some band logos done in multicoloured paint. Also Toxic faith is not a fan of speed limits and never obeys them but somehow has never been in a crash/accident.
Hope this helps, if you don`t pick me that’s fine, thanks for considering it. Have fun writing, I`m gonna read it anyway.
xoxodakota

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