Review for Personalized Stories

Personalized Stories

(#) Gerard_inspires_me 2011-10-08

idk if you still want anymore... but I have one :)

Name: Mary Catherine Robertson
age: 16 or 17
looks: dirty Blonde thats about 3 inches past her shoulders, its layered about 6 times and is always messy. (she just blowdrys it and lets it go)Blue-grey eyes, shes always wearing t-shirts and skinny jeans that are all obnoxiously bright colored and may not match exactly but they still look half-decent together.She doesn't wear anything except Converse All-star high-tops and has most of the colors. She has zits on her face, lots of them and doesn't normally cover them up. Her make-up only consists of black -r brown eyeliner (it changes according to her mood) and mascara. She always has on some sort of necklace and earrings and a bracelet, normally simple (nothing gold!! silver is fine but no gold!!!). She hads a tattoo of "I see you lying next to me with words I thought I'd never speak awake and unafraid asleep or dead" on her lower back. and a nose stud. 5'8 and 195 lbs.
Personality: Shes painfully shy and when you do get her to take out her headphones and talk, shes very awkward and loud. Shes hyper and innocent,and has rejected the faith that her parents have instilled in her her whole life (they raised her pentecostal in a more radical form). They've always been very strict and don't let her have a cell phone, they filter her music (just come up with some of the craziest stuff you can think of for a parent to do, and thats them) They're young parents. she has hated her body her whole life (her grandpa made a bunch of comments when she was young and has never stopped doing so (she hates him and refuses to have anything to do with him)) she one of those people who takes relationships as an 'all or nothing' sort of thing. She has a bit of a hero complex and is always trying to save evryone, but really hates talking to people. Easily defensive and wants to go into music when shes older.
Famous person I want: Gerard Way
What I want the story to be about: Altheda moves away from NW Ohio to Jersey (belleville to be exact). and almost instantly gets a huge crush on Gee. She just watches from afar for a while until She meets Ray and they become great friends. He asks her to join his band. He says they could use some back-up singers (she isn't half-bad) and she agrees (kinda reluctantly). She comes to the first band practice and Sees Gee and wants to run away, but forces herself to stay. She strikes up a pretty good relationship with all of the guys and Falls for Gee even more. a few months later, it finlyy sinks in that Gee doesn't seem to have the same feelings for her an hour before her sister calls her and tells her that her parents, brother, and other sister had died in a car crash. She tries to kill herself. Frank walks in and stops her. Things with her and Gee kick up a bit when She gets off of suicide watch and stays at his house for a while. They fall in love blah blah blah... if you have anything to add to it, please do :) add a twist or two.. please :)