Review for Almost

Almost

(#) PDunton 2011-11-05 05:04:40 AM

Well, Kacy is slightly dissapointing in this chapter, in my opinion. She used to be very strong and now she is some sort of stalking I-have-nothing-except-for-Brendon girl. And he almost hit her in the previous chapter, pulled her hair and hurt her. He should be ashamed and begging for forgiveness after that, not she. I hope that this is going to change though.) And I also hope that Brendon won't leave the band and they will end up well after all. Please, updete as soon as possible) You are a great writer)

Author's response

Yes! I'm so glad that you see this. I was trying to make it very clear.
There is gonna be more to this story and it will unfold but yes, right now Kacy is slightly disappointing to how I originally wrote her character.

There will be more from Brendon's POV as well! :)

Thank you so much! I'll try to get an update out as soon as possible.

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