heehee, in many of your stories they have red checked pj's :D (and yeah, that was very random, thank you)
anywayy, i loved this chapter! Ocean reminds me of a cartoon character, she is just lovely and awesome! wheee, and Frank is one of an optimist (:
please, never stop writing! i can't honestly see why you're insecure about your writing skills, they're awesome. seriously, your style is one of my favourites ever, and i've read J.K. Rowling and Tove Jansson (: hehe. thanks for this chapter and please update more when you're able to!
hahaha, I just realised that- sorry, I love red tartan PJs xD thank yoooou, glad you liked it :D :D awww, thanks so much, that really means a lot to me!! so glad you like my stuff :D thank you so much for taking the time to review, and will update soooon!