Hey! (God, I hate pages where I have to register first to leave feedback... nargh, anyways...)
When you sent me the link to this, I wasn't sure about what to expect in any way - might because I'd never read something of that fandom.
BUT -
I liked it. Really much. I love the tension and all the emotions and especially the dialoges with all the hidden messages. It was great, great writing style and great english :)
I really hope you'll continue, even tho there's lack of feedback. (I feel with you.)
Author's response
I'm so proud :) Thank you for reviewing it, I'm so happy now ^-^
Yeah, I will continue for sure, because I already have the next chapter, but I think I'll upload Saturday... Thank you! :)